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My Perfection by ~SouthernRose42189:iconSouthernRose42189:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Song


All my life I felt it
something not quite right
I could never accept it
Something was out of sight
had I made a mistake some where?
where had I gone wrong?

Chorus:

They told me its impossible
said it didn't exist
there is no such thing as perfection
but I found it in this kiss
your lips on mine
its so divine
nothings better than this
they say its not possible
but now I know it is
your my perfection

friends told me to forget it
they said I'm too uptight
I needed to relax
I needed to get a life
I was so very blue
till I found you
I was all alone
who could have known
it was you I needed
all along --

(chorus)

from the moment I first saw you
I knew I was complete
the first time I made you smile
I knew you had what I need
as I hold you close
I promise you
I'll never let you go
I will always protect you
I just had to let you know...

(chorus)

Bridge:

your eyes
your hair
your lips
your skin
your beautiful
perfection
(repeat 2x)

(chorus and fade out at the end)
©2008-2010 ~SouthernRose42189
:iconsouthernrose42189:

Author's Comments

so I came up with this idea at work
cuz the phrase "there is no such thing as perfect"
was stuck in my head
for some silly reason
hope you guys love this!
comment often :P

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:iconlordsnap:
~LordSnap Apr 29, 2008, 2:47:31 AM
Very nice lyrics. Shame I can't play much other than "Smoke on the Water", I love to hear this put to music.

--
Girl don't stop that screamin'
You're sounding so sincere
So much beauty
In the tracks of your tears

Dr. Music ~ Blue Oyster Cult
:iconaaron-leon:
*Aaron-Leon Apr 29, 2008, 8:28:28 AM
So this is Rock right?
Give me the tempo and I'll see what I come up with.
This makes what, three songs I've worked on for you now?

--
Thary:"How many people have you hurt that badly?"
Me:"Do you count the breaths you take?"
___
Jahi:"We're so going to hell for this."
Me:"You are. I'll just get kicked out again for almost taking over."
___
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~SouthernRose42189 Apr 29, 2008, 10:16:13 AM
thankies, the guy who commented below you is my friend
he is gonna help me put it to music
and since he might be in a band soon
its possible that someday you can hear these words in song
^_^

--
Follow the love story that bridges two worlds, the one on land and the one at the bottom of the sea...
[link]
:iconsouthernrose42189:
~SouthernRose42189 Apr 29, 2008, 10:17:24 AM
you always have to find some way to mention how much you help dont you
I already know you do
but I help you with your stuff too
thats what friendship is all about >_>
and anyway, I have a tune
but I cant sing it for you now
I am practically losing my voice

--
Follow the love story that bridges two worlds, the one on land and the one at the bottom of the sea...
[link]
:iconlordsnap:
~LordSnap Apr 29, 2008, 10:48:12 AM
Well, best wishes to you (both). I look forward to hearing it.

--
Girl don't stop that screamin'
You're sounding so sincere
So much beauty
In the tracks of your tears

Dr. Music ~ Blue Oyster Cult
:iconaaron-leon:
*Aaron-Leon Apr 29, 2008, 6:46:24 PM
Actually I was genuionly trying to figure out how many songs. I couldn't remember >_<.

--
Thary:"How many people have you hurt that badly?"
Me:"Do you count the breaths you take?"
___
Jahi:"We're so going to hell for this."
Me:"You are. I'll just get kicked out again for almost taking over."
___
Proud to be part of*100ThemesChallenge
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